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Your hair glows like the purest snow
on a cold pale night
Your eyes linger on my lips
begging, inviting me with the fire in your eyes
A new feeling bursts into my body, I feel it down to the core
I'm falling for you, everyday even more
Thinking about you, so far away
Waiting, I feel so alone
I finally found someone, and hes already gone
I will see him again, the day will come
and when I do, we will become one
I was tempted, with that look in your eyes
That fiery gaze, with it I could die
My lips met yours, and it was so sweet
Savory and sinister, soon again we will meet...
Its been such a long time that I've been so inspired to write a piece so romantic, I hope this feeling doesn't go away, at least not for awhile because I miss it, and there's no better feeling than this :heart:
Poem written by me
Picture not created by me!
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Dieffi Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I have featured this wonderful work in my newest RED-collection![link]

I hope you will agree and enjoy! :iconshinyheartplz:
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Arctic-RevoIution Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Professional Photographer
Lovely poem :)
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Ky1ieSmy1ie Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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Rutgerman95 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Ok, I'm not much into Naruto.
What version of the sharingan is this?
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WeakHoneyReenx Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
gegegegegorgeous!!!!!!!
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PiccoloFreakNamick Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
hey where did you get the contact lens?
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BlindedAudrey Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful and brilliant!
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DawnDancer11 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
nice
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Wicked-Amazement Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that wonderful feeling.. this poem is amazingly beautiful... emotions went wild when I read this.. It's amazing how strong that feeling can get.
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mrs-antichrist Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Wow , the poem is wonderful and the picture is awesome , too . it kinda looks like one of the pictures in the booklet of "eat me , drink me " , my fav record by Marilyn Manson ... BEAUTiFUL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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pkowalsky Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Amazing manipulation!
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AmandaArting Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Seriously loving this! Simply amzing!
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KoiNomz Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012

Came for the picture.
Stayed for the beautiful poem<3
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LemonicDemon Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Any chance to get the pic as a bigger version?
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starmic Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
whish I could feel it someday amazing pice
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SomethingStrang Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooh~! Red. Heh. nice.
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Gentleman-Status Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Very well writen, with feeling. ^_^
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bottled-mermaid Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
lovely verses! :heart:
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aero225 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Artist
awesomely beautiful !!!!
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Hikikomint Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
beautiful~
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ArtDirectors Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Awesome !!!
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abcartandme Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
That's an abomination - two comments only?! Here's the third one for you: amazing.
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MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Very beautiful poem. :D
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ASmallDaisy Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it!
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