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My flower

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Beautiful as can be
My flower of delight blooms
        Curing me
Inside  and   Out
although the leaves may be falling

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It stands strong and
reminds me that
   He loves me...
I was looking at the roses my boyfriend has given me over the past year, I love them and they remind me of him everytime I walk into my room :heart:
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Pollen-puff's avatar
A lovely simple poem, though if you don't mind a bit of constructive critique, the second to last line could perhaps do better with a more alluring word then "tall". It seems to stick out like a protruding and rusty nail in what is otherwise a pillow of silk.